TITLE: Little Red’s Heart Skips a Beat (214 Words)
AUTHOR: Lynne Marie
Little Red
concealed the frilly card and home-made chocolate hearts in her basket with a
doily. Now, if she could only sneak past that wily wolf. She couldn’t
use the excuse about not talking to strangers, but would figure something out. She
had to race to Grandmother’s house now or it’d be too late.
Red skipped
along the path, only to encounter the wolf!
Wolf smiled. “Come
with me to pick a rose bouquet?”
Now what was he up to? Red wondered. She pretended
to be grumpy. “Absolutely not. I’m allergic to wildflowers.”
Wolf pleaded. “But
they're roses – for Granny.”
Red moaned.
“Okay.” She adjusted the cover on the basket and kept her eye on the wolf.
Quickly, Red
picked a bouquet. “Fun's over – gotta run,” she said, trudging off. She dropped
candy hearts along the way to throw him off course. But she knew eventually, he’d
show up at Grandma’s house hungry as a wolf.
Red smirked. He’ll surely be surprised when he sneaks
through
the door! She thought of
Grandma, Woodsman, and all the others who would be waiting when he arrived.
Wolf quietly slid
the door open and peeked in.
“Surprise!”
everyone shouted.
Red beamed as
she handed over the basket. “Would you please be my Valentine, dear birthday
boy?”
Art (C) 2016 Kayla Michelle |
Awww, how sweet! I'll bet the wolf wasn't expecting that!
ReplyDeleteAwww, thanks, Kristi -- you are so sweet to take a peek at my teeny tiny story and comment! Thanks for stopping by My Word Playground and have a great day!
ReplyDeleteOh, and for any who are wondering, the contest is at www.susannahill.com
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun twist!
ReplyDeleteAwww, thanks, Jaclyn Kruzie. You are so sweet! Thanks for visiting My Word Playground!
ReplyDeleteFun twist ending, Lynne Marie. I just finished mine today. Hard w/only 214 words to play with.
ReplyDeleteAwww, thanks! I know, Kathy Halsey -- and especially since short is not my strong point LOL Good luck with your story, and thanks for visiting My Word Playground!
ReplyDeleteCute twist at the end! Very clever story.
ReplyDeleteAwww, thanks, @GabiSnyder for your sweet comments and for visiting My Word Playground.
ReplyDeleteLoved reading your fractured fairytale, Lynne Marie. I wasn't expecting the twist at the end. A fun read for my day :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, @Charlotte Dixon -- another sweet comment, and I truly appreciate it. I feel like its Valentine's Day :)
ReplyDeleteGreat twist on the classic fairytale. =)
ReplyDeleteThanks @Gregory E. Bray - I tried! Thanks for visiting My Word Playground!
ReplyDeleteAnother fractured fairytale... I did one too! This could either be very good or very bad. ;)
ReplyDeleteI know, @JEN Garrett. I agree (LOL). But I LOVE fairytales. I will have to go take a look at yours! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteLoved the surprise ending & play on Red Riding Hood! What a fun entry!
ReplyDeleteLoved your valentiny fractured fairytale take, cute story!
ReplyDeleteThanks @Jean James and @Patrical Nozell for stopping by and spreading your sweetness over her at My Word Playground. Have a great day!
ReplyDeleteInteresting redo of a classic!
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting, @Aileen Stewart and thanks for your kind words.
ReplyDeletenice one Lynne, now i can read over and over
ReplyDeleteAwwww, @Kim Jacobs UG -- I really appreciate your enthusiasm for my Valentiny entry!
ReplyDeleteOoh! Nice surprise ending! I knew she had something up her sleeve, but I didn't guess what! Thanks so much for a fun entry, Lynne Marie, and for joining in the first ever Valentiny contest!
ReplyDeleteThanks @Susanna Leonard Hill, for visiting My Word Playground and for reading my story. I look forward to many more Valentiny Contest in the future. Thanks for all you do!
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of a Valentine version of Little Red. Fun!
ReplyDeleteAwww, thank you @Laura Renauld! I appreciate your kindness and your visit here!
ReplyDelete