Monday, January 28, 2019

CRAFT TIP: Just Keep Reading, Just Keep Reading by Lynne Marie

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INSTRUCTIONS: Replace "Swimming" with "Reading."

In most of my picture books critiques I tell writers that they should read 100 picture books on their topic and theme. I feel like if I could see them reading my notes, their eyes would be glazing over or rolling back in their heads. When I get the revisions back I can tell the few who actually made an attempt. But I truly from the bottom of my heart want them to listen and to to the work this is why. 

First -- I am not lying or exaggerating when I share the fact that with each of my published picture books I read as close to 100 comp books for each one. I have done the work and know the benefits. Reading 100 books on your topic and themes is one of what I believe to be my secrets to success.

This gives an idea of how much I read for my currently contracted books: 

For Hedgehog Goes to Kindergarten (2011):
Over 100 Books, combined -
     On Hedgehogs  
     On First Days of School
     On School
     On Kindergarten
     On School Buses
     On Fear 
     On Friendship

For Hedgehog's 100th Day of School (2017)
Close to 100 Books, combined -
     On Hedgehogs
     On Art Projects
     On School 
     On Working Together
     On Friendship
     On 100th Day

For The Star in the Christmas Play (2018) 
Over 100 Books, combined 
    On Christmas
    On Nativity
    On Plays
    On Self-Esteem
    On not fitting in

For Let's Eat: Mealtimes Around the World (2019)
Close to 100 Books, combined
    On Children of Other Cultures
    On Food of Other Cultures
    On Other Countries 
    On Holidays of other Cultures

For Moldilocks and the Three Scares (2019)
     Over 100 Books, combined
     On Goldilocks tales, retellings and fractures
     Fairy Tales
     Fractures Fairy Tales
     Fairy Tale Theory
     Monsters
     Halloween

For titles, I search through, my library catalog, Amazon, Goodreads, and reading lists on google, with keywords like "Hedgehog," "fear," "first day of school," "School bus," "friendship," etc.

Your goal is to present an idea to publishers that:

1.    Has not been done before (you can also check this on Amazon before you write it).
2.    Is a fresh or unique take on an idea that has been done before.
3.    Is verifiably a kid-friendly topic.
4.    Is marketable.
5.    Has child appeal.

These are things you will be L@@King for as you read.

When reading the books, take note of the title, the author and illustrator, publisher, publication date, jacket copy or summary. I also do first and last lines, but that is optional. I save my notes in Google Docs in my folder with all my drafts and research and other notes. Here's how doing this exercise helps. You will start to see a pattern of: 

What's been done before. What hasn't been done before. Which publisher's have done it. Which publishers have done it. Which publishers do similar books. Which publishers don't do similar books. Which publishers have classic best sellers on their backlist that are similar to your idea and don't need something like it. 

You will see:
If you book is too similar. If your book is unique. If your book is not as good. If you book is better. If your book doesn't stand out. If your book stands out. 



is unique or has a fresh slant and is better than or will stand out against the rest, this is a very important part of the process. 

Do you see what I am getting at? There is no part of your time in this exercise that is wasted. 

Please note that all this work was done prior to submitting and often proves to be good thing, as you may be asked to provide comp books within the last three years when the book went to committee. 

So if you were hesitant to Just Keep Reading, I hope I have made you a Reader :) 

Good luck and Keep Reading! 

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Lynne Marie is the author of Hedgehog Goes to Kindergarten - illustrated by Anne Kennedy (Scholastic, 2011), Hedgehog's 100th Day of School – illustrated by Lorna Hussey (Scholastic, January 2017), The Star of the Christmas Play -- illustrated by Lorna Hussey (Beaming Books, 2018), Moldilocks and the 3 Scares -- illustrated by David Rodriguez Lorenzo (Sterling, pending) and Let's Eat! Mealtimes Around the World -- illustrated by Parwinder Singh (Beaming Books, 2019). You can learn more about her at www.LiterallyLynneMarie.com. 



To order the Star in the Christmas Play, click the title. Keep an eye out for MOLDILOCKS AND THE THREE SCARES, coming in August, from Sterling Children's Books! 


Saturday, January 26, 2019

PPBF: Don't Feed the Bear by Kathleen Doherty Illustrated by Chip Wass


Title: Don't Feed the Bear 
Author: Kathleen Doherty
Illustrator: Chip Wass
Publisher: Sterling Children's Books, 2018

Jacket Flap Copy: Bear had a perfectly great life...until park ranger put up a sign that read DON'T FEED THE BEAR. Well, Bear isn't about to let Park Ranger get away with claiming all the picnickers' goodies for herself. Craft Bear puts up a sign of his own, and the battle for yummy grub is on! Each worthy (and hungry) competitor tries to persuade park-goers to their side. At stake: delicious chow, like juicy burgers and chewy cookies. Who will win this war of words? 

My thoughts: First of all - LOVE the cover. I couldn't wait to get my hands on this book. Next, the text! This book is so timeless! It will appeal to grandparents and parents like me who watched the Yogi Bear cartoons and still entertain kids today with its fun ranger / bear banter in the text (fun sounds and language) and innovative signs and engaging art in the spreads. It's a fun romp through the park that will leave you wanting s'more! 

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PLEASE follow this blog so you don't miss any tidbit of information and please feel free to leave any comment or question you may have. I will do my best to answer all! 

Lynne Marie is the author of Hedgehog Goes to Kindergarten - illustrated by Anne Kennedy (Scholastic, 2011), Hedgehog's 100th Day of School – illustrated by Lorna Hussey (Scholastic, January 2017), The Star of the Christmas Play -- illustrated by Lorna Hussey (Beaming Books, 2018), Moldilocks and the 3 Scares -- illustrated by David Rodriguez Lorenzo (Sterling, pending) and Let's Eat! Mealtimes Around the World -- illustrated by Parwinder Singh (Beaming Books, 2019). You can learn more about her at www.LiterallyLynneMarie.com. 



To order the Star in the Christmas Play, click the title. Keep an eye out for MOLDILOCKS AND THE THREE SCARES, coming in August, from Sterling Children's Books! 


[LATE] Day Eleven - 1st Annual 12 Days of Christmas Write Christmas Challenge


The Holidays got away from me in the worst of ways -- I became very ill. So ill that I am only now feeling a little better (and my Christmas tree is STILL up), but promised myself I would finish up the challenge come snow or storm <grin>, so here I am! 

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Today I am going to give a nod toward Storystorm created by Tara Lazar (formerly PiBoIdMo). My own upcoming picture book with Sterling, Moldilocks and the Three Scares, illustrated by David Rodriquez Lorenzo (Sterling, August 2019) was a Story Storm idea in 2015 when it was PiBoIdMo. 

While I was driving around in the pouring rain today, I thought about how the word storm featured in the new PiBoIdMo title and how rain, must have, in some stretch, inspired Tara. I wondered if it might inspire me, too. I did realize that there were so many, many good books about rain, and I gave them a lot of thought. I checked them off in a mental list and as I looked out into the rain, two ducks waddled by and an idea came to me. 

Now, there are 1,000 books about ducks in the rain, so no, it's not about ducks in the rain. And that's exactly the point. My idea is NOT ABOUT DUCKS IN THE RAIN. Sometimes, with an idea, it's not about the first idea that comes to you, or the second, or third. When I do my writing workshops about ideas, I challenge participants to make a list of ten ideas. The idea behind this is to encourage writers to stretch their imaginations past their comfort zones. 

The same principle lies behind Storystorm. Don't stop at the first idea. B(rainstorm) a lot of ideas and then pick the best of the best. Don't write about ducks in the rain as it has been done time and time and time and time again and it would be quite the challenge to find a new and fresh angle that editors and readers will buy. 

I hope today's post inspires you to sign up for next year's Story storm (I'll be there sharing my thoughts for inspiration!) and to keep b(rainstorming)! 


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PLEASE feel free to follow this blog so you don't miss any tidbit of information and please feel free to leave any comment or question you may have. I will do my bes to answer all! 

Lynne Marie is the author of Hedgehog Goes to Kindergarten - illustrated by Anne Kennedy (Scholastic, 2011), Hedgehog's 100th Day of School – illustrated by Lorna Hussey (Scholastic, January 2017), The Star of the Christmas Play -- illustrated by Lorna Hussey (Beaming Books, 2018), Moldilocks and the 3 Scares -- illustrated by David Rodriguez Lorenzo (Sterling, pending) and Let's Eat! Mealtimes Around the World -- illustrated by Parwinder Singh (Beaming Books, 2019). You can learn more about her at www.LiterallyLynneMarie.com. 


To order the Star in the Christmas Play, click the title.

Thursday, January 24, 2019

HIP HIP HOORAY - IT'S MULTI-CULTURAL CHILDREN'S BOOK DAY! #ReadYourWorld - A Different Pond

A MCBD 2019 Book Review of 

A DIFFERENT POND 
by Bao Phi
Illustrated by Thi Bui
Format: Picture Book 
Capstone Young Readers, 2017
#ReadYourWorld

(Book provided by the Publisher)
A Different Pond (Fiction Picture Books)Despite working hard each day, a man wakes early
to fish with his son and together, to provide dinner for his family in America after emigrating from Viet Nam. This is the stuff that childhood, relationships, memories, life and America is made of. from.
This is one of those slice of life that isn't apple pie, but something better. Something unique and different with Thai flavor. Something that lets us walk in someone else's shoes for just a bit, or let's someone see themselves for just a while in book -- both wonderful journeys.
https://multiculturalchildrensbookday.com/blog/


is in its 6th year and was founded  by Valarie Budayr from Jump Into A Book
and Mia Wenjen from PragmaticMom.
Our mission is to raise awareness of the ongoing need to include kids’ books that 
celebrate diversity in homes and school bookshelves while also working diligently 
to get more of these types of books into the hands of young readers, parents and 
educators.  

MCBD 2019 is honored to have the following Medallion Sponsors on board

MCBD 2019 is honored to have the following Author Sponsors on board

We’d like to also give a shout-out to MCBD’s impressive CoHost Team who not only hosts the book
 review link-up on celebration day, but who also works tirelessly to spread the word of this event. 
View our CoHosts HERE.

Co-Hosts and Global Co-Hosts

TWITTER PARTY Sponsored by Make A Way Media: MCBD’s super-popular (and crazy-fun) annual 
Twitter Party will be held 1/25/19 at 9:00pm.E.S.T. TONS of prizes and book bundles will be given 
away during the party. GO HERE for more details.

FREE RESOURCES From MCBD
Free Multicultural Books for Teachers: http://bit.ly/1kGZrta
Free Empathy Classroom Kit for Homeschoolers, Organizations, Librarians and 

Hashtag: Don’t forget to connect with us on social media and be sure and look for/
use our official hashtag #ReadYourWorld.

Multicultural Children’s Book Day 2019 (1/25/19) is in its 6th year and was founded by Valarie Budayr
from Jump Into A Book and Mia Wenjen from PragmaticMom. Our mission is to raise awareness of the ongoing need to include kids’ books that celebrate diversity in home and school bookshelves while also working diligently to get more of these types of books into the hands of young readers, parents and educators.  
MCBD2019 is honored to have some amazing Medallion Level and Author Sponsors on board.
*View our 2019 Medallion Sponsors here: https://wp.me/P5tVud-
*View our 2019 MCBD Author Sponsors here: https://wp.me/P5tVud-2eN
We’d like to also give a shout-out to MCBD’s impressive CoHost Team who not only hosts the book 
review link-up on celebration day, but who also works tirelessly to spread the word of this event. View 

TWITTER PARTY Sponsored by Make A Way Media: MCBD’s super-popular (and crazy-fun) 
annual Twitter Party will be held 1/27/19 at 9:00pm. E.S.T.

Join the conversation and win one of 12 five book bundles and one Grand Prize Book Bundle (12 
books) that will be given away at the party!

FREE RESOURCES from MCBD
Free Multicultural Books for Teachers:  https://wp.me/P5tVud-1H
Free Empathy Classroom Kit for Homeschoolers, Organizations, Librarians and Educators: 

Hashtag: Don’t forget to connect with us on social media and be sure and look for/use our official 
hashtag #ReadYourWorld.


HIP HIP HOORAY - IT'S MULTI-CULTURAL CHILDREN'S BOOK DAY! #ReadYourWorld - Mela and the Elephant

A MCBD 2019 Book Review of 


Mela and the Elephant by [Phumiruk, Dow]
MELA AND THE ELEPHANT
By Dow Phumiruk
Illustrated by Ziyue Chen
Format: Picture Book 
Sleeping Bear Press, 2018
#ReadYourWorld

(Book provided by the Publisher)
After denying her brother the chance to explore the riverbank because he had nothing to offer her, Mela must give up her own possessions in an attempt to find her way when she is lost. Just when she, like her brother, has nothing left to offer, she meets a kind elephant and learns that we always have something to give.
This fable offers an important lesson on kindness and value, as well as gives a glimpse into the culture of Thailand via it's art, text and informative author's note.
With it's engaging main character, interesting creatures, compelling plot (what child can't identify with getting lost) and exotic setting, this story will keep the reader interested from beginning to end and remind them we always have something to learn and that a little kindness goes a long way.
https://multiculturalchildrensbookday.com/blog/


Multicultural Children’s Book Day 2019 (1/25/19) is in its 6th year and was founded
by Valarie Budayr from Jump Into A Book and Mia Wenjen from PragmaticMom.
Our mission is to raise awareness of the ongoing need to include kids’ books that
celebrate diversity in homes and school bookshelves while also working diligently
to get more of these types of books into the hands of young readers, parents and
educators.  

MCBD 2019 is honored to have the following Medallion Sponsors on board

BRONZE: Charlesbridge Publishing, Judy Dodge Cummings, Author Gwen Jackson,

Kitaab World, Language Lizard – Bilingual & Multicultural Resources in 50+ Languages,

Lee & Low Books, Miranda Paul and Baptiste Paul, Redfin, Author Gayle H. Swift,  

T.A. Debonis-Monkey King’s Daughter, TimTimTom Books, Lin Thomas,

Sleeping Bear Press/Dow Phumiruk, Vivian Kirkfield,


MCBD 2019 is honored to have the following Author Sponsors on board



We’d like to also give a shout-out to MCBD’s impressive CoHost Team who not only hosts the book
review link-up on celebration day, but who also works tirelessly to spread the word of this event.
View our CoHosts HERE.
Co-Hosts and Global Co-Hosts

TWITTER PARTY Sponsored by Make A Way Media: MCBD’s super-popular (and crazy-fun) annual
Twitter Party will be held 1/25/19 at 9:00pm.E.S.T. TONS of prizes and book bundles will be given
away during the party. GO HERE for more details.
FREE RESOURCES From MCBD
Free Multicultural Books for Teachers: http://bit.ly/1kGZrta
Free Empathy Classroom Kit for Homeschoolers, Organizations, Librarians and
Educators: http://multiculturalchildrensbookday.com/teacher-classroom-empathy-kit/
Hashtag: Don’t forget to connect with us on social media and be sure and look for/
use our official hashtag #ReadYourWorld.
Multicultural Children’s Book Day 2019 (1/25/19) is in its 6th year and was founded by Valarie Budayr from Jump Into A Book and Mia Wenjen from PragmaticMom. Our mission is to raise awareness of the ongoing need to include kids’ books that celebrate diversity in home and school bookshelves while also working diligently to get more of these types of books into the hands of young readers, parents and educators.  

MCBD2019 is honored to have some amazing Medallion Level and Author Sponsors on board.

*View our 2019 Medallion Sponsors here: https://wp.me/P5tVud-

*View our 2019 MCBD Author Sponsors here: https://wp.me/P5tVud-2eN

We’d like to also give a shout-out to MCBD’s impressive CoHost Team who not only hosts the book
review link-up on celebration day, but who also works tirelessly to spread the word of this event. View
our CoHosts: http://multiculturalchildrensbookday.com/about/co-hosts/
TWITTER PARTY Sponsored by Make A Way Media: MCBD’s super-popular (and crazy-fun)
annual Twitter Party will be held 1/27/19 at 9:00pm. E.S.T.
Join the conversation and win one of 12 five book bundles and one Grand Prize Book Bundle (12
books) that will be given away at the party!
FREE RESOURCES from MCBD
Free Multicultural Books for Teachers:  https://wp.me/P5tVud-1H
Free Empathy Classroom Kit for Homeschoolers, Organizations, Librarians and Educators:
http://multiculturalchildrensbookday.com/teacher-classroom-empathy-kit/
Hashtag: Don’t forget to connect with us on social media and be sure and look for/use our official
hashtag #ReadYourWorld.