Thursday, March 2, 2017

CONTEST ENTRY: #50 Precious Words Writing Challenge


FLY BY
By Lynne Marie


Hungry Fly.
Fly spies pie.
My, oh my!
Key Lime Pie.
Fly flies by.
Frog spots fly.
My, oh, my!
Frog hops high.
One nice try.
Fly sails by.
That sly Fly!
One more try.
Frog jumps high.
Lands in pie.
Pie in eye.
Fly flies by.



Bye, Bye, Fly!
 

18 comments:

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    1. Thank you so very much, McMarshall! I try (LOL)!

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  2. I love seeing these types of tongue twisters, they're so much fun to read, great job!

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  3. Awww, thanks @thenightengaletales.com -- yours was clever, as well!

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  4. Ii can see the illustrations now! Very visual. Thanks.

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    1. Oh, thank you, @Joanne Roberts. That was my challenge so I am glad to get that across!

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  5. Key lime pie and a cup of coffee sound good. Well done. Good luck!

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    1. I agree, @Gregory E. Bray! Thanks for stopping by My Word Playground!

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  6. I love key lime pie and so happy the fly got a taste. Your story is fantastic Lynne! And I love the illustration to go with. :)

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    1. Always good to see you here, @Traci Bold! Thanks for your positive thoughts.

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  7. Hi, Lynne! I love the way your words roll off my tongue. :)

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    1. Awww, thank you my dear Manju! Such a compliment coming from you! XOXO

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  8. So much fun, Lynne Marie! Key Lime Pie...love your visuals! Thanks so much for joining in the #50PreciousWords challenge. ;)

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    1. You are very welcome, @Vivian Kirkfield and thanks for hosting it. Always glad to have you stop by My Word Playground.

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  9. Awww, thanks @Lynne A. Davidson! Nice to see you over at My Word Playground!

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