Tuesday, August 28, 2018

A Study of Hooks and Fresh Angles in Random Recent Books by Lynne Marie

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"The more you read, the more you'll learn." Me.

I'm sure someone else has said this before, and I'm sure someone will say it again, but it's #Truth!

For today's post, I will go through three books on my reading list (notice the 3 beats) and make notes on what I feel attracted an Agent and/or Editor to these books:

MISUNDERSTOOD SHARK by Ame Dyckman. Illustrated by Scott Magoon.
Orchard Books, Scholastic, May 2018.

BEGINNING:  "Hello, people!" Today, on Underwater World with Bob, Fun Facts About ---"

NOTES: I don't think anyone would disagree that this beginning serves to hook the reader. First, the narrator is a newsperson jellyfish, filming live! How cool is that? Next, it's about Sharks! Need I say more. I live in Florida and have two words for everyone: SHARK WEEK! Although the craze has hit the nation, it's HUGE down here. One of the yearly featured scientists even lives down the road from us. But back to shark -- Shark is a wonderful character with a problem that many can identify with. He's misunderstood.  So to recap, we have a popular topic (sharks), an interesting character (misunderstood shark) and a compelling beginning (featuring a shark AND a jellyfish). That, in my opinion wraps it up with THREE HOOKS right away (within the first two spreads). As an added benefit it includes fun facts about SHARKS! As you can tell, I LOVE this book, but more importantly, kids do/will to!

First of all, I assure you -- I am NOT obsessed with sea creatures. The next title is purely coincidental
and just happened to be next on my "To Read" pile. PURELY coincidental.

Balzer and Bray, Harper Collins, 2017.

BEGINNING: Samson was a rather adventurous fellow.

While other piranhas stayed close to home, he wanted to explore far and wide. And while they stuck to the same old routine, Samson liked to get out and try new things.

NOTES: Right at the starting gate, a piranha is a new and unusual character. Who wouldn't want to follow him into his story, especially one that hinted at an adventure! Lastly, I feel a character who wants to break out from the stereotypic norm is one that readers will definitely be able to identify with. BAM -- three hooks! Again, in two spreads. So as you can see, there is take away value from this exercise. What do the first two books have in common? Both hook the reader right up front (even with the titles alone) and then reinforce the hook with the first two spreads.

THE LITTLEST VIKING by Alexandra Penfold
Illustrated by Isabel Roxas.
Alfred A. Knopf, 2018.

BEGINNING: Sven was the littlest Viking. But it didn't matter. He had the loudest cry, the fiercest set
of teeth, and if he felt like pillaging...Well, let's say no one was bold enough to stop him.

NOTES: Like the others, this one has a hook in the title. Vikings are definitely interesting and there aren't too many books about them. And being the littlest, well -- many readers will identify with that story problem. So right away, in the title, two possible hooks and then the third, that he is a bold an admirable character that no one was bold enough to stop. It hints at the question -- how far will he go? Readers will want to read on to see. So, there you have it! 1.2.3 Hooks right up front.

When writing, revising and revisioning your manuscripts, take a few moments to consider the hooks. Does your manuscript hook the reader with the title? With the first spread? With the second spread? If not, perhaps some revisioning will bring it where it needs to be to sell in today's market. Good luck to you!

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Lynne Marie is the author of Hedgehog Goes to Kindergarten - illustrated by Anne Kennedy (Scholastic, 2011), Hedgehog's 100th Day of School – illustrated by Lorna Hussey (Scholastic, January 2017), The Star of the Christmas Play -- illustrated by Lorna Hussey (Beaming Books, 2018), Moldilocks and the 3 Scares -- illustrated by David Rodriguez Lorenzo (Sterling, pending) and Let's Eat Around the World -- illustrated by Parwinder Singh (Beaming Books, 2019). You can learn more about her at www.LiterallyLynneMarie.com. 

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  1. Great book-study, Lynne! I'll need to check out your second and third titles. Haven't read those yet!

    1. So glad to see you here, Katie! Hope to see you soon! xO

  2. Thanks Lynne! You make an excellent point about using three hooks in the first two spreads. As Katie said, the second and third titles are new to me - I'm looking forward to reading them!

    1. So happy to see you here, Michal! I hope you enjoy them! XO

  3. Thanks Lynne! This was very informative and useful when I am considering a title. It really gave me a lot to think about and I will be checking these books out.

    1. Thanks for stopping by @Debra Pehrson Haun! I am happy to hear you found the information useful. Please stop back again!

  4. Thanks for posting this. Love these titles! So many great hooks. It really makes you think about having them in my own stories!

  5. Very good information, it has my mind going CRAZY!! thanks

  6. Great post. All those things you've been telling us. :) Examples help a lot.

  7. Thanks Lynne! This is super helpful. I can't wait until your next post!